Listen to the Lesson of Leysen

Listen to the Lesson of Leysen

I like writing that send me in a mood of metaphorical imagination. May be best is to show by example first. These are extracts from the buzz of Liesbeth Leysen titled "Running Rivers".

She slept like a rose

Fragrance of a new adventure

Sometimes there were simply no answers in life

'I crave you', said the mirror

He sensed that she could handle it. 'You are unstoppable, my darling', was this his thought, or hers? The phrase turned around in her mind, spreading its force everywhere. Suddenly her energy level was higher than ever.

River running without any hesitation

Her sensual lips curling deliciously like a fine woman sculpture made by Michelangelo.

The universe showing its endless beauty. Making the impossible possible

I then decided to get more extracts from another buzz of Liesbeth. This time from her buzz "Haunted By The Unexplainable".

Her heart reacted. Her breathing faster. Suddenly it was very quiet. So quiet. As if the whole universe was frozen.

The sun uncovered the secret.

His name echoed in her thoughts. Scenes played

The unexplainable was playing with her mind.

These extracts tell me a lot about Liesbeth and are an example of my saying our writing act as a mirror to our personality. Liesbeth has a wide imagination and her words are like a camera picturing events without saying a lot. I would say that Liesbeth doesn't like controlling people because she follows no controls in her writings. She writes in short and imaginative lines that have no verbs. Incomplete sentences that make complete sense is the paradox that she masters.

I wonder how patient is Liesbeth because of the shortness of her sentences. I feel as if her sentences have wings and fly. Most of the sentences average less than five words. As I wrote earlier it is her imaginative writing power that makes her write with a camera rather than a pen. This is the proof in the result of analyzing her second-mentioned buzz, which shows the following:

Number of words :

765.00

Number of sentences :

149.00

Average number of characters per word :

4.20

Average number of syllables per word :

1.39

Average number of words per sentence:

5.13

Flesch Kincaid Grade level :

2.78

(three years of academic years are enough to make her well-understood).

The word cloud for the same buzz is as follows:

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Postit is a repeating theme in Liesbeth's buzzes. You can see the prominent words in her writing in bold and size of words in her buzz. The mixture of emotions include smiled, sound, louder, grabbed, warm, quiet reflect her ability to see the warm and cold emotions and use them to her advantage.

Liesbeth teaches us that in simplicity we gain hearts.


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Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. beBee Global Brand Ambassador

#23
well thank you, I am blessed to be surrounded by the most wonderful bees! Huge honey kiss to them all. And Ali Anani on top ;-)

Ali ๐Ÿ Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee

#23
I was hesitant to continue with writing buzzes similar to this one- till I read your comment Deb\ud83d\udc1d Lange. You are an established author, but may consider finding more about you out of curiosity.

Ali ๐Ÿ Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee

#20
Agreed

Joyce ๐Ÿ Bowen Brand Ambassador @ beBee

Agreed

Marisa Fonseca Diniz

Marisa Fonseca Diniz

4 years ago #16

In the end all writers have a facility to express their innermost feelings in fictional character form!

Ali ๐Ÿ Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee

#15
This response is enough to tell who you are - a shining ambassador with a superb heart.

Ali ๐Ÿ Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee

Javier \ud83d\udc1d beBee buzz, which I used in reading the mind of Liesbeth. How do you find this idea? Thank you

Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. beBee Global Brand Ambassador

#12
Savvy Raj, big hugs to you, thank you

Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. beBee Global Brand Ambassador

#14
you see it through your lenses, which I gladly welcome, let the reader discover me in my writings, they are free to see what they sense Ali Anani, you are wonderful.

Ali ๐Ÿ Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee

#4
I have just noticed your comment my dear . I am so happy that the buzz is agreeable to you. I am in fact totally pleased. I just wonder if my analysis of your personality from your writing is not completely off target.

Ali ๐Ÿ Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee

#12
Thank you Savvy Raj and you shall be my next victim.

Ali ๐Ÿ Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee

#10
Thank you dear debasish majumder and I wish you would also address your comments to her. Thank you again Debasish for allowing me to vent out my two requests.

Ali ๐Ÿ Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee

I invite \ud83d\udc1d Fatima Williams to reflect on her thoughts

Devesh ๐Ÿ Bhatt

Devesh ๐Ÿ Bhatt

4 years ago #7

#7
i heard it :)

Ali ๐Ÿ Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee

May be I launch a series of buzzes on Writers' Minds Readability- and if I find the response to this buzz encouraging, I shall proceed with it. I plan this series for promising writers and surely you shall be one of them dear Tausif Mundrawala. I have still hear what Liesbeth will say.

Devesh ๐Ÿ Bhatt

Devesh ๐Ÿ Bhatt

4 years ago #5

#3
well, there is a long line of magnificient people before me. I will be grateful for such a piece. Maybe the reflections help me get my act together.

Liesbeth Leysen, MSc. beBee Global Brand Ambassador

Ali Anani, oh my God, wow, you rock my weekend!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you. Adorable present.

Ali ๐Ÿ Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee

#1
Thank you dear Devesh Bhatt and who knows I might be writing about you soon because you have honey to extract a meaningful buzz

Ali ๐Ÿ Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee

Thank you dear Devesh Bhatt and who knows I might be writing about you soon because you have honey to extract a meaningul buzz

Devesh ๐Ÿ Bhatt

Devesh ๐Ÿ Bhatt

4 years ago #1

The explainable plays with your mind Dr. What a beautiful buzz about the beautiful expressions of a beautiful person. Beauty magnified exponentially.

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